Dear Diary,
After I met up with Lennie... I was talking to him like how we are both close friends. We were talking about the farm and all the other things that we usually talk about. After I was talking to him I felt that I had to kill him for his safety if not he will be suffering.
after a while, I was like I dont think by killing him is a good idea but I had an idea. Why not we go to Malaysia to work at Starbucks or Mc Donalds. I was thinking that at first, but at last I finally told him. He kinda agreed but at the same time I was telling myself, how do I make him work at those places as his condition is like that?.. It might be difficult. At the same time, I told him that we will work together and will work to get some money and possibly go back to some place to build our farm that we always wanted.
Anyway will stop here and will post again soon as I am a bit busy right now, thats all that I could post.
Bye!!!
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I really like reading your blogs and i think that it's a good idea to try to write it in the 1970's and it makes it interesting and origional .
I love how they are working at starbucks or McDonald's haha ;) very nice! xD you have an interesting imagination :) thats a GOOD thing! haha well good job on this piece! :P
THAT WAS BY ROSALIND!
THE FIRST ONE
I think that you did a good job on writing it as if George was writing it. It was interesting that you wrote it in 1970s. It was a good idea, because it is as if George was looking back at his life with Lennie, and it's funny how you said they should've gone to Malaysia ans work at starbucks.
-Ivana.
i love your imagination!! starbucks or McDonald's!!! i love it! ha, really, really good job!! (:
dani
HAHAHA:D
Good and funny post:D
;ol.. Starbucks? So proo.. wonder if they actually got a job there:P hehe or Macdonalds:P
I also like how you change the story at the end.. it is not predictable at all:P hehe
Well, i am actually looking forward for the rest of George's life in Malaysia, if there is more to it:D
GOOD JOB!!!:):):D:D
Haha. Working in starbucks n Mcdonalds ?? Everything relli good but I thought that this was set in 1970? and in the intro, you sed "It all began in 1930". And that maybe altering the ending to work in Starbucks is not really that interesting as it could possibly be. but hey, nice job and effort!!!! Dont worry bout my criticisms. Im just giving tips on how to improve next time :)
Johan N.
haha work in mc donalds and Starbucks? Good idea ;D
Great ending, and I like how you close your diary entries and its not abrupt :D
GREAT JOB!!
well done i like reading diaries >:D
:O They should've come to Malaysia... we could of met them :O
lol
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