
Dear Diary,
It was Sunday afternoon. The resting horses nibbled the remaining wisps of hay and they stamped their feet and thy bit the wood. From outside I saw Lennie at the barn and Lennie sat in the hay beside a packing case. Lennie looked at the little dead puppy that was laying infront of him. He was stroking it with his fingers and was kinda talking to the dog.
Then, he was like, OMG! he suddenly remembered that the puppy was dead and the cause was from him. So he was trying to think of an alternative on how to not make it look like as if he did it!.
After a while, I came to see Lennie and seeing what he was up to. Ofcourse he didnt know that I knew what was going on. Some how rather, Curley's knew what was happening and said "I think you're nuts!"Then, after all that they both were talking in a kinda moderate tone. Somewhere in the conversation Lennie and Curley's wife were talking about how her hair is softer as she brushes it a lot. After sometime, he kinda stroked her hair softly.
Suddenly........ something happened without Lennie noticing at all. Lennie was choking her and shook her till she had a broken neck and was found dead. For a moment he knew that I will be obviously mad and he knew he did something wrong.
He quickly covered her with the hay like how he did with the puppy too.
Anyway will post another time as I have written kinda much. Will update soon.
Bye!!!
4 comments:
i like this picture in this one, it helps to understand and picture the things that you are talking about.
dani
the picture is very nice. and very interesting as well as the writing.
-shohei
This was maybe my favorite post. The descriptions of the barn were really vivid and original. I also like how you show how Lennie freaks out...OMG! So cute.
~Hannah
Suddenly........ something happened without Lennie noticing at all. Lennie was choking her and shook her till she had a broken neck and was found dead. For a moment he knew that I will be obviously mad and he knew he did something wrong.
He quickly covered her with the hay like how he did with the puppy too.
nice post, very vivid ecspecialy this part
..//max\\..
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